Marriage and Love ---- Part 5
He waves his hand as soon as he spots her at the terminal. ……………..
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hello people......
I know you were pretty excited to know what is going to happen to my story in the end..
Few of you felt my story was interesting but later on said this is something against our values and traditions...
few others liked it..
few others were angry with my post also...
Now ..I felt that you people would be better to conclude this story..
What do you think the climax of my story should be?
Or in other words am asking you people to conclude my story...
I'll wait for your comments...
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hello people......
I know you were pretty excited to know what is going to happen to my story in the end..
Few of you felt my story was interesting but later on said this is something against our values and traditions...
few others liked it..
few others were angry with my post also...
Now ..I felt that you people would be better to conclude this story..
What do you think the climax of my story should be?
Or in other words am asking you people to conclude my story...
I'll wait for your comments...
posted by usha at 12:13 PM
12 Comments:
u've ran out of ideas huh? If u had wanted the readers to end it, u cud've done that a couple of days after the previous post. I guess all these days u were thinking of some ending which wud please everyone n werent successful at that. And now conveniently u've left it to the readers!
hmm usha.. comeon you got to end this. u see it was like a real story all the while and now you ask us to end. doesnt really look good. :-)
no...this is not the end...u gotto do better
well well, I think you have an ending in mind and you are not sure it will go well with the readers, come on..spill the beans, tell us what happened, and like i have said each time i commented before, this is a true story....so tell us wat happened or.....has it not happened yet?
Fact that I just read all 4 parts wihout a pause tells how gripping the narration is.. Excellent work!! But frankly I didn't like the sudden decision of Lalitha to meet him.. I feel the author's smart work is lost a bit here.. But again I understand its easier said than done.. Please you've got to end this, Btw I'm just a visitor Usha...
Lovely usha.. i never knew that u r such a good writer.. u never disclosed your writing abilities in our college.. whyyyy :-(.. nyways.. i had a nice reading... well.. regarding the conculsion, i don't feel necessarily to b concluded.. It's a conflict b/w emotion and intellect..
Ravi....
hey Usha
Wonderful narration...I feel u can go on for some solid works!!People like me will definitely make them best-sellers...lolz!!
And about the ending...hmm...tht no where strikes my mind..I have read all thru jes for an ending and u disappointed me... :((
Plzz post an ending!!!!!
Tejo Karthik
hey usha! very nice story.. though it doesn't seem to be a story!! i think this definiltly happened...
please give the ending soon... No more suspense please!!
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A gud story that is narrated well. I must congratulate on your work.Though skeptical, I take your statement that this is not a real time story. Coming to what you have put infront of the readers.....I really wonder why many of the readers havent come up with suggestions for the ending. Well i would definately ask you to end it as it is you who had started it and certainly it would be you who holds a better ending than many of us, rather any of us.
Hmm according to me, the skeptical Lalitha should meet up with the person whom she is fantacized with, but merely as a friend who is there to wish him 'a very happy married life'.Perhaps she should come along with her husband to prove that she is fine with Kanti though she holds feelings for this once loved soul.
Being a responsible lady who had managed to digest the fact of rejection and moved on, commit herself to Kanti, She should be responsible enough to wish a happy life for this guy and his fiance'.The feelings that troubled her all while was purely out of her joy and victory over her past love.Moreover she has no regrets in her life.Taking sometime for herself would easily let her know this fact.
Thus i think that Lalitha should come along with Kanti to wish him a happy journey and to explain him to accept the fact that many things in life doesn't really need to be undone when really not required.Since the decisions they take after getting committed no longer remain for themselves, they affect their newly bonded persons and the environment as well.The Commitment for life is no small decision, once broken,it may lead to several weak situations in future.
usha garu..so how did the story end..I am really curious to know..
once lalitha meets him the mind calms down. the infactuation with chat and calls cannot persist for a long time a glance can remove it smoothly. generally most of the minds get obsessed with appreciation but lalitha is elder enough to clearly differentiate what is love what is attraction . No doubt once she meets she can just wish him a good luck for his future and leave the place. That would have happened when they met too.
cheers :-)
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